5 thoughts on “Full – A Haiku

  1. I really like this, but feel that perhaps ‘dumping’ coukd be replaced by ‘shedding’ or even ‘spilling’ to give the flow added imagery on the watery theme after brimming, running and over-flowing.
    Just a thought – Graeme:)

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